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awesome, dude! I'm seeing a lot of personality show through :D
One thing I can suggest is that even if one eye is farther away from the viewer they're still so close together that it won't really get smaller vertically, just horizontally.
And since you mentioned the hair don't be afraid to have locks of hair come away from the silhouette of the head, at the top its one smooth line but following the direction of her locks of hair you can add more volume :0
I hope that all makes sense I don't normally give critiques because it's so pushy to throw my opinion at ppl lmao
anyway lemme know if I need to explain anything better!

Greebs responds:

alright, i see, thank you for the advice! :D

Clark?

That's me!
The blurry writing is pretty out of place, though.

WalkingShrub responds:

I did that because of you saying it could be obnoxious.

Uuuugh, so real.

It looks great, but it's totally creepy. Aesthetically, if you made her neck a little longer it would look fantast. Also, the eyebrows are like, on her eyelids, if you changed those two things, it would look beauts.

Bubbowrap responds:

xD

Hey, thanks for the tips! I'll definitely implement those changes. I didn't even notice the eyebrows!

You only know Shempi?

Listen to them ALL. They're my favorite band.

sucho responds:

i shall D:

well. as much as youtube will offer

I like it

I kind of wish you DID add the city, because everything in the picture has all this attention to detail... and then there's just a big blank yellow space. But the girl is a unique design, and the picture flows pretty well, so G'job.

ZeroSyndicate responds:

Thanks, I actually constantly look at this an go "i wish i woulda done this, or that, or what if..." for instance, I dislike the rock in the foreground and want it to be slightly darker to fit in a little better. Add more shadowing to the girl so she doesnt stick out soo much. The green i want to transition better cuz it sits in one spot, so expand the gradient more really. I thought about adding a Iron Giant style robot in the background around the blank space of the ocean. Lots of ideas that came up didnt actually make the final cut unfortunately.

Thanks again for the Review!

Pffft

Typical pikachu, spamming B-Down.

RiverJordan responds:

:D

Blech

I wanna put a chao in a blender. Mediocre.

leaf1110 responds:

uhh thanx i guess but your reveiw doesnt make sense

Hahaha, oh man.

The expression on Rob's face is just priceless. Johnny's reaction tied it together, I actually laughed out loud. I thought it was sweet but since it's just a 3 panel comic you could have put more care into it . :U

Bobert-Rob responds:

I don't really know how I could've done anything more with it, hah. It's such a simple joke. I'm glad you liked it anyway, though!

helo

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