awesome, dude! I'm seeing a lot of personality show through :D
One thing I can suggest is that even if one eye is farther away from the viewer they're still so close together that it won't really get smaller vertically, just horizontally.
And since you mentioned the hair don't be afraid to have locks of hair come away from the silhouette of the head, at the top its one smooth line but following the direction of her locks of hair you can add more volume :0
I hope that all makes sense I don't normally give critiques because it's so pushy to throw my opinion at ppl lmao
anyway lemme know if I need to explain anything better!
alright, i see, thank you for the advice! :D
I'm really digging this style man
Thanks a bunch!
You're making us look bad!
The blurry writing is pretty out of place, though.
I did that because of you saying it could be obnoxious.
Why does nobody get it?
As cute as a blood-soaked monster can be!
I like the use of Benday dots, I'll have to check this comic out!
It's like it couldn't decide whether it wanted to be realistic or cartoony.
It almost looks like you traced everything but the face (poorly), and then did the face on your own. Like, can you not see how wrong the face is? Good God!
I hope she's still friends with you after this.
I like this a lot! The little girl is so cute, and the perspective is really cool. I also like the subtle blood spatter on her face. Sick job broski! The only thing I would improve is how the lines on the tree are so much thicker than the lines on the girl.
Uuuugh, so real.
It looks great, but it's totally creepy. Aesthetically, if you made her neck a little longer it would look fantast. Also, the eyebrows are like, on her eyelids, if you changed those two things, it would look beauts.
Hey, thanks for the tips! I'll definitely implement those changes. I didn't even notice the eyebrows!
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