BeamShank's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Left4lol:Survive This]

Nice!

It's funny 'cause I was wondering about you the other day. And don't leave NG because you're afraid of making the same toon. That's just silly.

[Red Ronin : 24 HRC]

Nice!

There wasn't a single part I didn't like, in the end it all came together great. Hope this isn't the last of these :D

[... for Sister]

Mehhh

Not to be offensive, but this is sappy to the point it's hard to watch.
The acting wasn't very good, I didn't like the art, the animation was just passable, and the story didn't invoke ANY emotions in me because it was trying too hard.
Keep trying!

[8 Bit God of War]

ELL OH ELL

Turning a game into a game, eh? That's so meta. You should've thrown it on youtube instead of NG, though. It's pretty dang short.

[Super Pokemon]

Nice effort.

I liked the little song in the preloader, it was better than the movie to me.
the actual movie was just like: Oh, hey, violence! Don't really on that to get a laugh;D
Keep goin'!

[The death and birth]

I wasn't all for the art style.

Reading through your responses to the reviews, you mention that the kid falling wasn't human. At first it seemed like the "creature" was a human drawn in a unique art style. If you were trying to establish that the "creature" and human baby were of seperate species, I would have changed the creature's skin color or something.
9/10 for style, and a unique message.
I didn't like the art style, but judging by that would be too shallow as there is a lot going for this animation.

lemoon responds:

I wanted it to be just slightly different from human. Actually it's design based on these small mayan sculptures, to have a little bit mystical/weird look.
It is not a human, but it is not an animal too. i would say that it is mystical creature, or even a soul, since he lives, in a different dimension.

[In the Morning...]

pretty good!

Hey man, you've got a lot of potential. Don't let me down :U

[it'll be okay in the end.]

Mmmmeeeeh

Not very good animation and a bland story to go with it.
first of all, the heads shrink during the walk cycles, and when a character stops moving, the jittery animation stops, that tells me it wasn't a stylistic choice - or wasn't executed well if it was. Next the story sends a terrible message. The moral of this animation, is to wait. Wait it out. I know the moral is meant to be universal, but I hated the fact that everyone is swooning over an animation about some stick-figure whore who leaves to be with someone else. Don't send the message that it's okay to forgive the person who ditched them. I know it's a puny under-lying theme, but the twelve year olds on this site who are raving about this movie are impressionable idiots.

NEWAYZ
you still have room for improvement, don't let me down.

[The Kirby Collab]

Whew!

After the endless amount of time put into this, I'm glad to see it's finally done. All of our efforts payed off, and it looks great.

FlashfireEX responds:

Indeed.

[My Walrus]

! D:

I actually felt really bad for the walrus.
MY walrus is rad.